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2010年商务英语考试(BEC)高级写作范文(一)

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Report writing Ex 4: Sample answer: (235words)

  Reassessment of job satisfaction: Sue Pearson(PR Dept.)

  Introduction

  This report sets out to use Workset colours to assess the accuracy of my job description as PR officer and to suggest a number of changes.

  Findings

  It is clear that there is a difference between the way the company views the job and the reality as I perceive it. Firstly, a number of areas which demand a significant proportion of my time are not mentioned in the official job brief. The segment on the pie chart which provides most cause for concern is the pink sector; this relates to my attendance at a number of meetings which I can contribute little. Another significant area is the grey segment; this refers to the unscheduled time I spend sorting out computer problems. I feel these activities are hampering my core work. As can be seen from the pie charts, the time I spend actively working to meet the goals agreed with my line manager is less than envisaged.

  Conclusions

  The above discrepancies clearly indicate that my current job brief is inaccurate.

  Recommendations

  I would recommend that my official job brief should be updated using the Workset colours. It would also be valuable to consider the proportion of non-core colours in the pie chart and to investigate whether work in these areas could be carried out by someone else more suited to these tasks.

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description [di'skripʃən]

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n. 描写,描述,说明书,作图,类型

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current ['kʌrənt]

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n. (水、气、电)流,趋势
adj. 流通的

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inaccurate [in'ækjurit]

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adj. 不准确的,错误的

 
valuable ['væljuəbl]

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adj. 贵重的,有价值的
n. (pl.)贵

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proportion [prə'pɔ:ʃən]

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n. 比例,均衡,部份,(复)体积,规模
vt

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sue [su:]

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vt. 控告,起诉
vi. 请求,追求,起诉

 
satisfaction [.sætis'fækʃən]

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n. 赔偿,满意,妥善处理,乐事,确信

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assess [ə'ses]

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v. 估定,评定

 
contribute [kən'tribju:t]

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vt. 捐助,投稿
vi. 投稿,贡献,是原因

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core [kɔ:]

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n. 果心,核心,要点
vt. 挖去果核

 


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