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下面是2014年英语四级作文范文：留学海外，希望考生了解四级范文的写作思路，增强自己的写作实力。
Studying Abroad 留学海外
(1)有人认为留学海外有许多好处。
(2)也有人认为留学海外有许多弊端
(3)我的看法是…
四、六级作文类型：提纲式对比分析类议论文
审题构思：
这是篇段首句续写式作文。经分析，文中所给的前两段的段首句均可作为该段的主题句。第三段中，可根据所给的段首句暗示的写作方向，得出结论，并以此为该段主题句。故第三段主题句为：One must consider both sides of the factors carefully before making up his mind。由此完成通篇构思，其全文和各段框架具体构思如下：
全文构思
1.Attending school abroad has many advantages.
2.There are also some disadvantages.
3.One must consider both sides Of factors carefully.
段落构思
第一段 Topic Sentence Attending school abroad has many advantages.
l. widen our vision
2. travel widely
3. improve the second foreign language
4. acquire updated knowledge
第二段 Topic Sentence There are also many disadvantages。
1. language barrier
2. misunderstanding
3. high tuition and cost of living
第三段 Topic Sentence One must consider both sides of the factors carefully.
1. good to study the subject weak in our country
2. should consider the disadvantages
精品词汇
widen our visionhorizon 开阔视野
get acquainted with 了解
first-rate facilities 一流设备
language barrier 语言障碍
绝妙衔接
... In the first place, … Secondly, … Thirdly, …
But the most important thing... For all these...
However, … As a result, ... Besides, ... Furthermore, …
Therefore, ... On the whole, … But on the other hand, ...
良好开端
1. Attending school abroad has many advantages.
2. Attending school abroad has many positive aspects.
3. Studying abroad has many strong points.
4. Studying abroad has many favorable aspects.
成功收口
1. But on the other hand, one must not lose sight of the disadvantages.
2. But most important of all, one should not neglect the disadvantages of studying abroad.
3. Finally, one should always think carefully before making up one's mind.
4. Finally, everything depends on his personal financial status. If the advantages can outweigh the disadvantages, he should make up his mind to study abroad. Otherwise, it's advisable to study at home.
组段成篇
读读范文，看看文章的写作模式——文章先分析留学海外的益处，随后分析其弊端，最终得出结论。读读范文，看看文章的开篇、过渡与收口。把作文的思路看出来。把作文的思路读出来。借你一双慧眼，请把文题的奥秘看个真真切切，明明白白。
读读范文，想想看，如今有多少大学生、高中生甚至是中小学生都在拼命地想到海外留学，他们有的在海外功成名就，鹏程万里；有的却倾家荡产，学业难成，贫困潦倒，陷入十分尴尬的境地，有苦难言。留学海外，有利也有弊。是弊大于利还是利大于弊一切因人而异。想想看，对此话题，你持何高见动动脑筋，想想看，作文的思路想出来。
读读范文，想想你的作文该怎样写读了范文，就该你露一手了。看你能否写出绝妙的语段，精彩的作文，胜过作者。切记：你今天的努力会换回你明天的成绩；你今天的努力更会换回你明天的写作能力。
