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六级写作经典范文及点评:Self employment

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  大学生自我创业已经不是一个新鲜的话题了。那么自我创业有何利,又有何弊呢?看过本文之后你就知道了。或许这对面临毕业的你还是个不小的帮助呢!


  Self employment

  Self employment could bring many advantages. One of the advantages of being self-employed is that the profit the business makes belongs to the owner. If the self-employed person succeeds in business, he has the chance to earn a great deal of money. The profit earned is the reward for the owner’s effort, ability and creativity. Thus, a second advantage is that a person’s intelligence and abilities have a direct effect on the earnings. A third advantage of being self-employed is that a person can control his working hours. While not all self-employed people are completely free, most of them have more control over this area than the salaried people.

  However, being self-employed is not without problems. First, being one’s own boss places the responsibility directly on that individual shoulders. Everyone has some weaknesses in a certain aspects. These weaknesses will affect how successful a self-employed person is. Second, though the self-employed can earn considerable profits with a successful business, losses can force them out of business and sometimes, place them in debt. A third disadvantage concerns income security. Self-employed people have no guaranteed wage. Their earnings can vary greatly, depending on business conditions. Salaried people, however, can generally count on continued earnings. In addition, salaried people often enjoy fringe benefits that mean greater peace of mind. One of these benefits may be insurance paid for by the employer that continues the employee’s salary in the event of sickness or accident while many self-employed people do not have such protection①.

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  行文点评

  文章结构简单明了。第一段阐述了自我创业的3个好处。第二段分析了自我创业所存在的问题。

  两段中“first, second, third”的使用,不仅使文章在句式上显得条理分明,更在内容上体现了连贯性。

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intelligence [in'telidʒəns]

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n. 理解力,智力
n. 情报,情报工作,情报

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insurance [in'ʃuərəns]

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n. 保险,保险费,安全措施

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inherit [in'herit]

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v. 继承,遗传

 
security [si'kju:riti]

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n. 安全,防护措施,保证,抵押,债券,证券

 
affect [ə'fekt]

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vt. 影响,作用,感动

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considerable [kən'sidərəbl]

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adj. 相当大的,可观的,重要的

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employee [.emplɔi'i:]

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n. 雇员

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certain ['sə:tn]

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adj. 确定的,必然的,特定的
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vary ['vɛəri]

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v. 变化,改变,使多样化

 
advantage [əd'vɑ:ntidʒ]

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n. 优势,有利条件
vt. 有利于

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