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英语六级满分作文精讲 第67期:助学贷款的优势

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Advantages of Getting a Loan from the Bank for My Studies

助学贷款的优势

I am a college student from a farmer's family in a mountaineous area. A year ago, I was admitted to a famous university. Before entering the university, I was told that the necessary expenses during my four years'study would cost nearly fifty thousand yuan. My parents had collected all the money there was to collect, including the money bor rowed from their relatives, but it was hardly enough to meet the needs. Then, good news came that I could resort to the bank for a loan. I thought it was a good idea and so I did it.
My decision was based on the following con sider ations: First, with the loan I can pay the tuition and support my life on the campus.
Secondly, I don't have to depend on my parents who are always worrying about the enormous family expenditure.
Thirdly, I will always have the pressure upon me which forces me to study the hard way.
Fourthly, I have to live a very simple life and save every coin possible. To sooner liquidate the debt, I sometimes work as a home tutor, sometimes a door-to-door salesman, sometimes a restaur ant waiter.
Fifthly, while doing part-time jobs, I have accumulated a lot of social experience, bitter sometimes, sweet occasionally, but happy all the time.
I think the above are the advantages the loan from the bank has brought to me. They are beneficial not only to my studies at the university but also to my future career, because I firmly believe in the saying "Harsh life produces a diligent and intelligent man."

CET6六级作文结构分析:
·上大学需要费用
* 家庭困难
* 助学贷款好消息
·优点
* 付学费和生活费
* 不依赖父母
* 有压力感
* 生活俭朴, 勤工俭学
* 品尝社会百味
· 结论
* 艰苦的生活能培养出勤奋而有智慧的人

CET6六级作文内容分析:
本文是一篇记叙文。作者以第一人称来写, 首先记叙希望助学贷款之由来, 主体部分列出了助学贷款之五大优点。最后一句引言“ 艰苦的生活能培养出勤奋而有智慧的人”结束全文。这类题目的写作必须整理出几条轻重相当的优点, 每条优点的表达意义要完整, 可用一句、两句或多句来写。本文较适合六级水平。

CET6六级作文万能句型:
loan n. 贷款
mountaineous area 山区
be admitted to 被录取入
expense n. 费用
collect all the money there was to collect 收集所有能收集到的钱
resort to 求助于
tuition n. 学费
family expenditure 家庭开支
study the hard way 努力学习
liquidate the debt 偿清欠债
home tutor 家教
door- to-door salesman 上门推销员
accumulate v. 积累
social experience 社会经验
bitter sometimes, sweet occasionally, but happy all the
time 时苦时甜, 但总是很快乐
beneficial a. 有利的
Harsh life produces a diligent and intelligent man. 艰苦的生活能培养出勤奋而有智慧的人

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intelligent [in'telidʒənt]

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adj. 聪明的,智能的

 
harsh [hɑ:ʃ]

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adj. 粗糙的,使人不舒服的,刺耳的,严厉的,大约的

 
decision [di'siʒən]

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n. 决定,决策

 
tutor ['tju:tə]

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n. 家庭教师,导师
v. 当家庭教师,当导师

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expenditure [iks'penditʃə]

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n. (时间、劳力、金钱等)支出,使用,消耗

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collect [kə'lekt]

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v. 收集,聚集
v. 推论

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accumulate [ə'kju:mjuleit]

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vt. 积聚,累加,堆积
vi. 累积

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pressure ['preʃə]

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n. 压力,压强,压迫
v. 施压

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beneficial [.beni'fiʃəl]

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adj. 有益的,有利的

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occasionally [ə'keiʒənəli]

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adv. 偶尔地

 

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