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快乐 IELTSers,是不是觉得每天看范文很累呢?那就不妨自己动手写一写吧。前两天的内容努力消化,每天不用强求都能记住,但是第二天力求能回忆出第一天的30%,then that totally would be fineO(∩_∩)O。

Topic: Some people believe that the success of a country depends on the prosperity of its economy. But others claim that it depends on the level of life of its people. What is your opinion?
依旧是社会生活类话题,看完后试着列个提纲什么的,自检前两天的学习有没有效果呢。

Along with the huge progress of globalization, many countries have put so much emphasis on their economic development, and even some people believe that the becoming economy should be considered to be a judgment of a country' s success. However, there are still a lot of other people arguing that the success of a country depends on the living standard of its national citizens. Personally speaking, the later does go along with my own standpoints.

说明一是认为国家取得成就的主要依靠经济的繁荣,二是赞成公民的生活水平决定了国家的发展。自己支持后者。

First we should admit that the advancement of a country' s economy is of highly significance. It is unquestionable that the self-confidence of a nation, the strength of a country in both military and business fields, the individual wealth etc. largely depend on the status of that country' s economic condition, and usually the first step of flourishing a nation is economic construction. Under no circumstance can a nation be regarded to be successful when its people are still struggling on the poverty line.

肯定一国经济发展对国家进步的意义。这段话主要的就是中间的被动句,不难。没什么好说的,果断背诵之!!

But a country' s success is by no mean mere economic promotion, and those who hold the opinion like this tend to live under the illusion that all the country' s troubles can be equate to its economic problems. In fact, they fail to take into account that some problems, such as the deterioration of environment, which may probably exert detrimental impacts on people' s health, or the increasing mental pressure from peoples work or study, which may lead to psychological diseases, would indisputably impair the residents' sense of well-being and cannot be solved only through the augment of their wealth. As a matter of fact, the criteria of a nation' s success should focus on the residents' life issues, which are comprehensive manifestations of a country' s politics, economy, culture and many other aspects.

提出不能忽视人类创造的经济以外的,如,人所处的环境,文化的重要性,同时所有这些都依托在人身上。

From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that any enlightened government should give priority to the contemplation of improving people' s living standard through multifaceted methods rather that concentrating only on developing their economy, so that they would gain glorious achievements eventually, and any countries, who neglect this vital point and contrive to flourish, would pay heavy price, which they cannot afford.

倡议政府把注意力放在提高公众的生活水平上,只有这样,才能实现经济的稳步发展,有助于国家的发展。

Vocabulary aquisition: (请务必记住这里的70%的内容,句型请见红色标示部分)

along with
沿着,顺着,和……一起,与……一道 文中和with的意思和作用差不多

huge progress & rapid advancement & glorious achievement
believe & argue & address in favor of & hold a view that 表达观点的词
illusion=opinion=view 指看法
impact=bad influence
indisputably=doubtless(昨天学的,记得不?) 毫无疑问地
psychological=mental adj. 心理的;心理学的;精神上的
这些意思相近的词放在一起,用起来会得心应手,虽然是小词,却是必不可少的

becoming economy 表示正在发展中的经济

under no circumstance 在任何情况下都不
Under no circumstance will I believe you. 无论什么情形之下我都不会相信你。
Under no circumstance shall we lose faith in the future. 在任何情形下我们都不应该对未来失去信心。

by no mean 决不
William was by no mean stupid. He knew something happened. 威廉决不愚蠢,他知道有些事情发生了。

equate to 比作,比拟;相当;相提并论,等量齐观;使相等
A single soda per day can equate to sizable weight gain, too. 每天一杯碳酸饮料也可以等同于相当体重的增加。

take into account 重视,顾及,把…考虑进去
People seem to fail to take into account the fact that education does not end with graduation. 人们似乎没有考虑到教育并不是终止于毕业的事实。

deterioration n. 恶化;退化;堕落
detrimental adj. 有害的;不利的 n. 有害的人(或物);[古]不受欢迎的求婚者
(环境问题的两个重点词!必须会,一起记)

exert on 施加
Own dislike the matter, do not have to exert on other person. 自己所讨厌的事情,不要施加在别人身上。
exert too pressure on

impair vt. 损害;削弱;减少

augment
n. 增加;增大 The Sentry Damage augment or rig bonus is applied properly. 岗哨炮伤害增强设备改装件加成已应用。
v. 增加;增大 Most countries depend to few extent on cereal imports to augment their own crops . 大多数国家都在某种程度上依靠谷物进口来补充自己的作物。

criteria n. 标准,条件(criterion的复数)(这个词常用在小作文中,相当于standard)
Image criteria make a difference, because middlemen are often viewed as an extension of the producer. 形象标准有着重要意义,因为中间商通常被视为生产商的延伸。

enlightened v. 启迪(enlighten的过去式) adj. 开明的;文明的;进步的;被启发的

contemplation n. 沉思;注视;意图
I am quite content with philosophic contemplation. 我非常满足于哲理性的冥想。

multifaceted adj.多层面的
However, attracting foreign talent involves heavy responsibilities and is a complex and multifaceted issue. 然而,人才的吸引是一件任重而道远、复杂而多层面的 问题。

contrive vt. 设计;发明;图谋 vi. 谋划;设法做到
When I feel wronged, I can contrive a hundred reasons against forgiveness. 我若被人冒犯,可以设想上百个不饶恕对方的理由。

Alternative assignment: 要么选择把第二段的红色部分背熟,要么Acquire 70% above-mentioned words and vocabulary,相信you can do it。今天的词level会稍稍有些高哦。Guys, fighting!

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extent [iks'tent]

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n. 广度,宽度,长度,大小,范围,范围,程度

联想记忆
poverty ['pɔvəti]

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n. 贫困,贫乏

 
neglect [ni'glekt]

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vt. 忽视,疏忽,忽略
n. 疏忽,忽视

联想记忆
construction [kən'strʌkʃən]

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n. 建设,建造,结构,构造,建筑物

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dislike [dis'laik]

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v. 不喜欢,厌恶
n. 不喜爱,厌恶,反感

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complex ['kɔmpleks]

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adj. 复杂的,复合的,合成的
n. 复合体

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military ['militəri]

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adj. 军事的
n. 军队

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augment [ɔ:g'ment,'ɔ:gmənt]

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vt. 增加,补充
vi. 扩大
n

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impair [im'pɛə]

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vt. 损害,削弱
[计算机] 损伤

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pressure ['preʃə]

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n. 压力,压强,压迫
v. 施压

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