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2013年10月26日雅思写作Task2真题解析附范文
A rise in the standard of living in a country often only seems to benefits cities rather than rural areas.
What problems might this difference causes ? How might these problems be reduced ?
题目讲解：
题型：报告
类别：社会发展
题目解释：城市和乡村地区的生活水平发展不均；问可能导致的问题 和 解决方案
开头段：由于本题是报告类，因次开头段只要引出话题并告诉考官将讨论problems and solutions 即可。
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The significant improvement in the standard of living in a country has sparked a major dispute in the whole society. Some people argue that this only bring advantages for cities rather than rural areas. Correspondingly, this issue poses a vast number of problems such as overpopulation, seriously damaged environment, which can harm the people's lives. My writing will go into further analysis of the problems and introduce some instant measures to tackle them.
主体段1
开头句：总体说明该情况可能带来不好的影响。
关键词句推荐：The imbalance between the standard of living in cities and that of countryside poses a variety of possible painful repercussions.
分论点1：城乡生活发展不均会导致农村居民大量向城市聚集，给公共设施带来负担
关键词句推荐：Firstly, it is clear that when the quality of life of city dwellers is improved, many people in rural areas tend to move to the cities seeking better lives.
As a result, the cities would soon become too crowded with large number of people living in them，and this would result in deterioration of many important services such as health, transport, education etc.
分论点2： 发展不均可能带来不满和动荡
关键词句推荐：that the standard of living in cities outpaces that in the countryside may give rise to the discontent and social unrest.
主体段2
开头句：总体说明可以采取一些措施。
Nevertheless, many initiatives could be adopted to effectively ameliorate the problem.
措施1： 政府可以采取有利的财政政策和投资计划来发展农村经济，进而提高生活水平。
关键词句推荐：A favorable policy and an investment program should be implemented in rural areas to foster the local economy and thus living standard.
措施2：政府也可以将力气花在直接提高农村基建上。
关键词句推荐：Another more direct measure can be upgrading infrastructure in the countryside such as electricity system, amusement centers, schools, medical clinics.
结尾段：重申可能的问题和方案
