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2015年5月30日雅思写作解析及语料库
Some people believe that international tourism have harmful effects. Why do they think so? How to change their views? 有人认为，国际游的影响是有害的，他们为何持有这种观点，如何改变他们的的观点?
雅思点评：
题目指令为分析原因和解决问题。本文为旧题改写，需要完成的任务是分析国家发展旅游业带来的弊端以及提出解决策略，帮助人们改变对于旅游业的消极态度。
雅思全文布局图：
首段：背景介绍 + 作家立场
二段：原因的展开：谈及为何一些人对于旅游业持有消极的的态度
三段：策略的展开：谈及国际旅游业的利好去说服一些人对于旅游业的消极态度
尾段：作家立场：支持旅游业，总结旅游业对于游客和相关国家的利好。
雅思原创范文赏析：
首段：背景介绍 + 写作目的
International tourism has been encouraged in many nations around the globe because it produces positive effects on economic growth and local government. However，some problem inevitably ensue，which accounts for why some people hold negative attitudes toward international tourism. This essay aims to explore the reasons why some people are not supportive of tourism and then present some recommendations.
雅思解析：
1. It produces positive effects on economic growth and local government 国际旅游对经济发展和地方政府有积极作用
2. However，some problem inevitably ensue，which accounts for why some people hold negative attitude towards international tourism.然而，一些问题不可避免地随着发生，这就解释了为何一些人对于国际旅游业持有消极的态度。
3. This essay aims to explore the reasons why some people are not supportive of …… and then present some recommendations. 本文的写作目的是探究下为何一些人不支持……，再提出相关的建议。
二段： 原因的展开：(游客为何对于旅游业持有消极的态度)
The reasons why some people hold indifferent attitudes toward international tourism are manifold. Here, some of them will be explored. First, a large flowing population many cause serious destruction of the natural environment in those areas owing rich tourism resources. Further, some visitors unconscious behaviors might be considered as disrespectable and unfriendly due to the cultural differences. For instance，questions about religious beliefs， marriage，personal income are considered as taboo for some westerners. Eventually, even though sightseers might make the locals’ purse heavy, they, at the same time, interfere with the peaceful current life in some areas
雅思解析：
1. A large flowing population many cause serious destruction of the natural environment in those areas owing rich tourism resources.大批游客的涌入会对那些拥有旅游资源地区的自然环境造成严重的破坏
2. Some visitors unconscious behaviors might be considered as disrespectable and unfriendly due to the cultural differences. 由于文化的差异，一些游客的行为也许会认作是不值得尊敬的，不够友善的。
3. For instance，questions about religious beliefs， marriage，personal income are considered as taboo for some westerners. 例如，有些西方人很忌讳别人打听他们的宗教信仰，婚姻状况，个人收入。
4. Even though sightseers might make the locals’ purse heavy, they, at the same time, interfere with the peaceful current life in some areas. 尽管游客会增加地方人的收入，同时，他们也许会打扰一些地区一向平静的生活。
