大家好！今天我们来看一看怎么给别人提建设性意见

Constructive Criticism 建设性的意见

Thanks for taking look at my resume!What do you think?

谢谢你帮我看简历！你觉得怎么样？

Are you ready for my constructive criticism?I don't want to offend you.But this needs some work!

你愿意听我的建设性意见么？我不想让你不高兴，但是这份简历需要再改进一下！

Poor word choice 用词不当

Comes from a good place 本意是好的