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Morning~AmyLee要认真规划好备考的每一天，你呢！非常感谢大家的陪伴，我们YY可可备考小组的成员越来越多了，不许偷懒，托福优秀范文一天写一篇学一篇哦，写好了可以发送至我邮箱keke3096@qq.com进行互批，共同进步!^^
我已经托福三战过了，对考试各方面都很熟悉，所以大家到考前了有什么疑惑也可以发邮件给我，我会尽力为大家解答。
每天的写作任务是这样的，写好每天的作文发至我的邮箱（如果你想加入作文批改小组请注明），我们将进入互批作文模式。
在此我对每天的topic进行解析和范文精讲，请大家写完作文之后不忘进行比较，找出自己的不足之处。开始吧！
35. Do you agree or disagree with the followingstatement? Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, orsporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television.Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
参考分析： 同意或者不同意都是片面的。讨论现场的好处(比如气氛好air of excitement；投入感强getting involved)和电视转播(television live show)的好处(比如，有解说commentary/commentator；多镜头various angle of view;镜头组接montage)，至于选择，要视情况而定。
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35、参加现场表演比在家看电视好 |
Topic 35 Live vs.television broadcast
To many people, attending a live performance, such as a melodrama,a concert, or a sporting event is so incredibly attractive that they will goall out to get a ticket, regardless of the expense or the difficulty involved.But why not enjoy the performance on television while you can comfortably liein your sofa or couch with popcorn at hand? That is because attending a liveperformance provides you with far more enjoyment than watch it on TV.
In a live performance, you will feel that you are in the companyof many friends who are indulged in the same interest, who can share yoursorrow or pleasure or excitement. This kind of resonance at heart is so rarely sensedin our daily life that this one reason itself is sufficient enough for manypeople to attend a live performance. While watching it on TV, we certainly findit hard to feel the emotion sharing, and our loneliness is hardly mitigated.
Furthermore, attending a live performance gives you a senseof participation that cannot be replaced by watching on TV. Live performance isan interaction between the audience and the performers, and both parts of the performancedecide whether it will be a wonderful one. In this way, you may lament (哀叹，文中译为悲伤)or laugh, may sob or smile as you are soinfluenced by the misfortune or happiness of the characters. You may fall intothe indescribable intoxication（难以言表的陶醉之中）while listen to afavorite piece of music. And correspondingly, the performers will receive theresponse of their audience and act accordingly. So the final success of theperformance results also from the participation and interaction of theaudience, of which you are a member.
With these foregone advantages, we may say that attendingthe live performance is definitely much more enjoyable than TV watching.
好了，今天就说这么多，大家一定要坚持练习作文，每天进步一小点，一个月下来托福写作绝对是质的提升！希望大家跟着我每天一篇练下去，写作都是硬功夫，跟小时候每周都要写语文作文是一样的，功夫到家自然成，加油！
最后再mention一下互评作文的事情，这个作文互评目前只有我在做，我希望尽可能给有需要的可可粉们提供帮助，如果你们中有愿意跟我一起批改大家作文的，一定要mail我加入哦！（互批可以进步非常快，做过才知道！）
可可托福备考小组官方邮箱：Keke3096@qq.com
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