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Morning~AmyLee要认真规划好备考的每一天，你呢！非常感谢大家的陪伴，我们YY可可备考小组的成员越来越多了，不许偷懒，托福优秀范文一天写一篇学一篇哦，写好了可以发送至我邮箱keke3096@qq.com进行互批，共同进步!^^
我已经托福三战过了，对考试各方面都很熟悉，所以大家到考前了有什么疑惑也可以发邮件给我，我会尽力为大家解答。
每天的写作任务是这样的，写好每天的作文发至我的邮箱（如果你想加入作文批改小组请注明），我们将进入互批作文模式。
在此我对每天的topic进行解析和范文精讲，请大家写完作文之后不忘进行比较，找出自己的不足之处。开始吧！
36. Choose one of the following transportationvehicles and explainwhyyou think it has changed people's lives.
• automobiles
• bicycles
• airplanes
Use specific reasons and examples to support youranswer.
参考分析： 根据[70]，应该选择automobiles。注意，要回答为什么汽车改变了人们的生活。
相关题目：[70]、[106]、[177] |
Topic 36Avehicle that changed people's lives
An airplane is a form of transportation that has changed people'slives. Thanks to the plane, our lives are now faster, more exciting, and moreconvenient that before. You cannot deny that a plane is fast. For example, the Concordeflies at supersonic speed. A businessman can leave Parisat 11 a.m. in the morning andarrive in New Yorkat 8 a.m. the same morning intime for a day's work. Many business people in Europe will fly to London for a noon meeting and then return home to Rome or Madridfor dinner.
It is always exciting to take a plane trip. When you takea trip by plane, you know that you might cross many time zones, many oceans,and many countries. When you get off the plane, you could be in a place that speaksa different language. A plane is like a magician's trick. You get in a box andyou come out somewhere totally different.
Nothing can beat the convenience of a plane. In the old days,it might take you days to do what the plane can do it an hour. Boats, forexample, only leave on certain days of the week and take a long time to get totheir destination. Planes give you the option to leave several times a day andget you to your destination quickly.
Although other forms of transportation may be more comfortable,none has changed the way we do business and live our lives more than the plane.Thanks to the speed, excitement, and convenience of the planes, our lives arericher.
好了，今天就说这么多，大家一定要坚持练习作文，每天进步一小点，一个月下来托福写作绝对是质的提升！希望大家跟着我每天一篇练下去，写作都是硬功夫，跟小时候每周都要写语文作文是一样的，功夫到家自然成，加油！
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