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Morning~AmyLee要认真规划好备考的每一天，你呢！非常感谢大家的陪伴，我们YY可可备考小组的成员越来越多了，不许偷懒，托福优秀范文一天写一篇学一篇哦，写好了可以发送至我邮箱keke3096@qq.com进行互批，共同进步!^^
我已经托福三战过了，对考试各方面都很熟悉，所以大家到考前了有什么疑惑也可以发邮件给我，我会尽力为大家解答。
每天的写作任务是这样的，写好每天的作文发至我的邮箱（如果你想加入作文批改小组请注明），我们将进入互批作文模式。
在此我对每天的topic进行解析和范文精讲，请大家写完作文之后不忘进行比较，找出自己的不足之处。开始吧！
37. Do you agree or disagree that progress isalways good? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
参考分析： 不同同意。Always是一个绝对的修饰词。
参见：[29] |
37、发展不一定都是好的 |
Topic 37 Is progressalways good?
Is progress always good? Scientific progress brings us manyconveniences and advanced machines, such as computers, automobiles, and so on.Progress seems to have made life simpler and more comfortable. But if we analyzeit carefully, we will find that progress is not always good.
Modern industry brings us many conveniences. But at the sametime, some problems emerge. For example, “the green-house effect” is a veryserious problem that scientists try to solve. It increases the earth'stemperature, causes icebergs to melt and the ocean level to become higher andhigher. Maybe someday the oceans will swallow some big cities nearby them.
Progress enhances the efficiency of industrialproduction, but it also brings us another serious problem -pollution. Pollutionin some countries is so serious that ecological balance is damaged and manyanimals and plants lose their living environment and become extinct eventually.The air is polluted and it is not suitable for people. The water is alsopolluted and people are facing deficiency of drinking water.
Progress makes the pace of life faster and faster becauseof the application of computers and automatic machines. People have to workfaster than before and it makes them nervous. More and more physical andpsychological problems disturb people's life. Many people do not have time forrecreation.
From the above statements, it can be concluded thatprogress is not always good. It has its own negative influences on our life.Let hope those problems can be solved by more progress.
好了，今天就说这么多，大家一定要坚持练习作文，每天进步一小点，一个月下来托福写作绝对是质的提升！希望大家跟着我每天一篇练下去，写作都是硬功夫，跟小时候每周都要写语文作文是一样的，功夫到家自然成，加油！
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