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Morning~AmyLee要认真规划好备考的每一天，你呢！非常感谢大家的陪伴，我们YY可可备考小组的成员越来越多了，不许偷懒，托福优秀范文一天写一篇学一篇哦，写好了可以发送至我邮箱keke3096@qq.com进行互批，共同进步!^^
我已经托福三战过了，对考试各方面都很熟悉，所以大家到考前了有什么疑惑也可以发邮件给我，我会尽力为大家解答。
每天的写作任务是这样的，写好每天的作文发至我的邮箱（如果你想加入作文批改小组请注明），我们将进入互批作文模式。
在此我对每天的topic进行解析和范文精讲，请大家写完作文之后不忘进行比较，找出自己的不足之处。开始吧！
39. Do you agree or disagree with the followingstatement? With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn moreinformation and learn it more quickly. Use specific reasons and examples tosupport your answer.
参考分析： 不能完全同意。要表明It islargely truethat (把statement换个句子结构写进来)。
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39、同意在技术的帮助下，学生能够可以学习到更多的信息，并且学得更快 |
Topic 39 Can newtechnologies help students?
“With the help of technology students nowadays can learnmore information and learn it more quickly." I agree with this statement.Technology has helped a student cross national boundaries, open up new viewsand increase the speed at which he imbibes information.（吸收信息）
New technology in the form of Internet has helped breachthe limitations of a country's frontiers. A student sitting in a small town of India can access thelatest course material released by MIT on his topic of interest. He can gainaccess to the latest info that his happening in physics and thus improve hisexisting warehouse of knowledge. He can browse through the previous papers inphysics and dwell deeper and deeper in his specialized study. And how long doesthis all take? A click of a mouse. Compare this with searching through themazes of his small hometown library, only to find some outdated articles andconsuming a great part of his daily activity.
Technology has helped open up many new avenues that previouslywere considered impossible. Take for example the simple LCD projectors. Theygive a visual feel of the subject that the student is studying helping him tolearn not only quickly but also effectively. Or for that matter of videoconferencing.（电视会议）A student can askquestions and clear his lingering doubts（清除他的怀疑）when he interacts with a professor consideredas the authority in his field.
An overlooked aspect of technology is the transportation.With rapid advances in transportation, a student in
In concluding I would like to say that technology has playeda major role not only in increasing the speed at which students learn but alsoin bringing a radical change in the way they learn it.
好了，今天就说这么多，大家一定要坚持练习作文，每天进步一小点，一个月下来托福写作绝对是质的提升！希望大家跟着我每天一篇练下去，写作都是硬功夫，跟小时候每周都要写语文作文是一样的，功夫到家自然成，加油！
最后再mention一下互评作文的事情，这个作文互评目前只有我在做，我希望尽可能给有需要的可可粉们提供帮助，如果你们中有愿意跟我一起批改大家作文的，一定要mail我加入哦！（互批可以进步非常快，做过才知道！）
可可托福备考小组官方邮箱：Keke3096@qq.com
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