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79. Your city has decided to build a statue or monument to honor a famous person in your country. Who would you choose? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.

参考分析:

选一个名人,最好是历史上的名人,这样好写。

  • 纪念意义
  • 历史意义
  • 教育意义

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79、找一个人,不仅是专业知识出色,而且还要对社会有所贡献。可能需要杜撰一个。

Topic 79 Who would you choose to build a statue for?

If the City Government of my town - Moscow asked me to choose a person whose statue will be built, I would choose no one. And here I can explain my point of view.

In my opinion there are already statues of many famous people who merit a statue. Right in the center of Moscow there is a great statue of Jury Dolgirukiy. He founded the Moscow City in 1447. He is also famous as a great defender of his people. If you look at this statue, you will see a very strong man riding a horse with a spear in his arms and the injured dragon lying on the ground. In my view it symbolizes the meaning of his deeds and people's remembrance and respect to him.

Another statue in Moscow is that of Alexander Pushkin. He was one of the most famous Russian poets. He has made an important contribution to the worlds literature. His poems are realistic. They answered to questions asked so many years ago, and they can still answer today's questions. His statue looks so natural as if he is alive. His statue is standing in the middle of the Pushkin Square. With a book in his arms, he looks very calm and contemplative.

Another monument that I consider impressive is the monument for people who died during the Second World War. I cannot describe it because there are no proper words to express the emotions I feel when looking at this statue. I just feel painful and sad for their death and as people cannot bring them back to life, they can only try to prevent future wars.

In conclusion since there are already enough statues for famous historic figures in Moscow, I would like to say that I prefer to see modern art sculptures in the streets of this historic city. I would allow young modern sculptors to exhibit their works in the streets.

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contribution [.kɔntri'bju:ʃən]

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n. 贡献,捐款(赠)

 
spear [spiə]

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n. 矛(正负电子对撞机)
vt 用矛刺

 
remembrance [ri'membrəns]

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n. 回想,记忆,纪念品

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impressive [im'presiv]

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adj. 给人深刻印象的

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specific [spi'sifik]

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adj. 特殊的,明确的,具有特效的
n. 特

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realistic [riə'listik]

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adj. 现实的,现实主义的

 
describe [dis'kraib]

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vt. 描述,画(尤指几何图形),说成

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statue ['stætju:]

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n. 塑像,雕像

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application [.æpli'keiʃən]

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n. 应用; 申请; 专心
n. 应用软件程序

 
conclusion [kən'klu:ʒən]

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n. 结论

 


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