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托福分类话题写作每日一练 第150期

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Morning~AmyLee要认真规划好备考的每一天,你呢!我已经托福三战过了,对考试各方面都很熟悉,所以大家到考前了有什么疑惑也可以发邮件给我,我会尽力为大家解答。

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150. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Watching television is bad for children. Use specific details and examples to support your answer.

不能同意,但是watching too much television is bad for children, and some programs are really detrimental to children.

参考分析:

  • 使儿童对文字失去耐心
  • 使儿童变得孤僻
  • 使儿童变得不喜欢活动
  • 影响孩子的视力

150、同意看电视对于儿童不好
(1)看电视让孩子变的孤僻,不和别的人接触
(2)看电视让学生变的不爱活动,对身体健康不好
(3)看电视让孩子学到很多不应当学得东西

Topic 150 Is watching TV bad for children?

Everything consists of goodness and badness. People cannot evaluate something only by its benefit or only by its harmfulness. This is why I disagree with the point that watching television is bad for children. I admit that if the children do not watch TV properly, such as watching television excessively or seeing something unfit for them in TV, watching TV would do harm. However, watching TV can benefits children if they make good use of it. Watching TV can help children learn a lot of knowledge in an interesting way, can be a good entertainment for children, and can help children manage their time. In those senses, watching TV is not bad for children.

First of all, most TV programs for children are designed in an interesting way, which is easier for children to understand. For example, a lovely presenter tells a beautiful story with attractive frames on TV and at the same time she introduces some knowledge to her young audience. Thus, children can get knowledge by listening to a story.

Secondly, watching TV can be a different form of various entertainments from what children are accustomed to. Most children like animated cartoons that give them charming images. Some children may enjoy their time in children entertainment TV programs and may also enjoy watching other children performing in TV. Hence, watching TV is another entertainment for children.

Lastly, watching TV can help children make good use of their time. Many TV programs have their certain times. Children always know the show times of their favorite programs. If they want to watch these programs on time, they should complete others things by that time. In other words, children have to be quicker in their other activities. Thus, watching TV can be an active help when children plan their time.

I do admit that watching TV properly needs direction of the parents. Yet, we cannot doubt watching TV is good in some ways for its teaching knowledge to the children, for its entertaining the children and for its well effecting on children's time. I believe most adults today can still remember how their favorite children TV programs benefited them when they were children.

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specific [spi'sifik]

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adj. 特殊的,明确的,具有特效的
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charming ['tʃɑ:miŋ]

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excessively [ik'sesivli]

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entertaining [entə'teiniŋ]

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adj. 引起乐趣的,娱乐性的,令人愉快的 n. 招待,

 
animated ['æni.meitid]

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presenter [pri'zentə]

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entertainment [.entə'teinmənt]

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