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托福分类话题写作每日一练 第151期

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Morning~AmyLee要认真规划好备考的每一天,你呢!我已经托福三战过了,对考试各方面都很熟悉,所以大家到考前了有什么疑惑也可以发邮件给我,我会尽力为大家解答。

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151. What is the most important animal in your country? Why is the animal important? Use reasons and specific details to explain your answer.

参考分析:

可以假装你是日本人,说三文鱼很重要;也可以假装你是韩国人,说狗很重要;可以假装你是美国人,说鹦鹉很重要;当然,就算你不加装他国人士,也可以相出很多动物,起码,熊猫可以想到吧?如果你长在草原,马很重要;如果你长在农村,牛很重要。

要我写,我会写——猪。小时候就写过文章《猪——浑身是宝》

151、选择的动物是狗
(1)能够陪伴老人
(2)教育孩子热爱动物
(3)看家护院

Topic 151 The most important animal

My homeland Taiwan is well known for its great and diverse possession of animals. However, among this great variety of animals, Taiwanese deer is the most important and unique animal. This beautiful animal saved my ancestors from starvation in their pioneer days, and what's more, it symbolizes the beauty of my homeland Taiwan.

When my ancestors first came to the Island of Taiwan, they had nothing except a few pieces of clothing and tools. As they were facing hunger, they caught the glimpse of a beautiful deer in silky beige fur and snowwhite spots. Astonished at the sight of such a stunning creature, they appreciated God for bestowing them such a precious gift. The deer saved my ancestors from starvation, and hence, my people worship it as the gift from God. Were it not for the Taiwanese deer, my ancestors would not have survived, and I also would not be sitting here writing this essay.

Moreover, Taiwanese deer symbolizes the dazzling beauty of my homeland---the Taiwan Island. Taiwan has been famous for the name "Formosa" which means "beautiful" given by a Portuguese explorer in the1600's. Its beauty is celebrated worldwide. Moreover, the Taiwanese deer is widely recognized as one of the most beautiful kinds of deer. It acquires silky fur of the color of cedar, covered by little white spots that spread out like stars in the sky. In addition, I can proudly and positively say the only place on the Earth where you can find a Taiwanese deer is the Taiwan Island. Every characteristic of the deer matches my beautiful homeland perfectly, and the deer is the best representative of my homeland.

Overall, although there are various animals living in my homeland, Taiwanese deer is the most important one as it was the food that saved my ancestors and it represents my homeland. Unfortunately, this incredible creature now is facing extinction. I genuinely hope by writing this essay my voice can be heard and people will try to save the Taiwanese deer.

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worship ['wə:ʃip]

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n. 崇拜,爱慕,做礼拜
vi. 做礼拜

 
dazzling ['dæzliŋ]

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adj. 令人眼花缭乱的,耀眼的 动词dazzle的现在

 
application [.æpli'keiʃən]

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n. 应用; 申请; 专心
n. 应用软件程序

 
starvation [stɑ:'veiʃən]

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n. 饿死,饥饿

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precious ['preʃəs]

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adj. 宝贵的,珍贵的,矫揉造作的
adv.

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spread [spred]

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v. 伸展,展开,传播,散布,铺开,涂撒
n.

 
characteristic [.kæriktə'ristik]

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adj. 特有的,典型的
n. 特性,特征,特

 
representative [repri'zentətiv]

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adj. 代表性的,代议制的,典型的
n. 代

 
incredible [in'kredəbl]

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adj. 难以置信的,惊人的

 
except [ik'sept]

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vt. 除,除外
prep. & conj.

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