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毕加索 Picasso
Katie J. Famous artist Pablo Picasso also highlights the importance of creativity. In the beginning of his painting career, Picasso did unoriginal work. Though it was apparent he was extraordinarily talented, the pieces lacked creativity and originality. Later, he started to experiment with his art, resulting in the outcome of his most famous pieces. Picasso's incomparable creativity not only resulted in beautiful artwork but he created an entirely new style of abstract artistry. His inspiring work forever changed the world of art and made our culture more rich and multifaceted.

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术大师毕加索作为这个部分的结束实在是再合适不过了。我唯一的建议就是作者可以在提到一些名画的时候再具体一点。也就是说，如果直接提到《格尔尼卡》、《多拉·玛尔的画像》等名字，就会显得更加权威、专业。