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猫头鹰【隐形模板】托福系列之二
》老托福题库185中可以挖出12道真题,只问“为什么?” 因此也只需回答“Why?”——无需争辩。用简单而熟悉的结构【起承转合】便足以应付。
写作输赢的关键在于【造句】与【论证】。如果菜鸟一时打造不出清楚,精简,正确的英文句,那么也只好硬着头皮背上几句无中生有的【废话】,好歹也凑字数而又不跑题。每当百思论证又不来电,建议磨刀十天,用功于名师慎小嶷的【裸奔写作法】——纵横联想,前后连贯。
起:两个理由A和B (三句话:1. A+B来答问题(这是主题)。2.仿写废话。3. 仿写废话。)
承:论证支持理由A (六句话:第一句招牌句Topic Sentence A,再延伸造加五句话)
转:论证支持理由B (六句话:第一句招牌句Topic Sentence B,再延伸加造五句话)
合:归纳理由A和B (三句话:第一句是A+B,再加两句废话)
》真题的题外指示:Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
温习大纲:起3承6转6合3
起 Introduction: 申论主题(一句答题,两句废话)再多的理由,也只许举出AB两个。
承 Body Paragraph A: 支持主题(理由A,+例子细节)
转 Body Paragraph B: 支持主题(理由B,+例子细节)
合 Conclusion: 重申主题(一句归纳A+B,两句废话)
》废话连篇(低分模板):菜鸟可立于不败之地。请检验以下实例,看一看议论文的引言如此写开头三句话,是不是轻而易举?第一句仿写真题,第二句废话,第三句还是废话。(废话最容易记住。)
——真题:【university】为何上大学?
起——引言
1. 主题 There are two main reasons why people attend university: career preparation and increased knowledge.
2. 废话 Specifically, the two factors are what makes a difference in this respect. (可以改写)
3. 废话 Some relevant examples and details will be given to illustrate.(可以改写)
合——结论
1. 归纳 In conclusion, without the benefits of career preparation and increased knowledge, people would not consider attending university.
2. 废话 To some extent, people are able to experience a change of life. (可以改写)
3. 废话 And here lies the difference.(可以改写)

——真题:【museum】博物馆
1. 主题 There are two main reasons why people visit museums when they travel to new places: education and entertainment. 2. 废话。 3. 废话。
——【longevity】长寿
1. 主题 There are two main reasons why people are living longer now: better living standards and better medical care.
【dangerous sports】危险运动
1. 主题 There are two main reasons why some people are attracted to dangerous sports: fun and thrill.
——真题:【work】为何工作
1. 主题 Besides money, there are two other main reasons why people work: freedom from boredom and vice.
——真题:【gift】难忘礼物
1. 主题 There are two main reasons why people remember special gifts that they have received: the giver and the occasion.
——【read and write】会读会写
1. 主题 There are two main reasons why the ability to read and write is more important today than in the past: work and life.
——真题:【studying abroad】出国留学
1. 主题 There are two main reasons why many students study abroad: academic achievement and foreign language.
——真题:【music】音乐重要
1. 主题 There are two main reasons why people listen to music: audio enjoyment and killing time.
【organizations】团体机构
1. 主题 There are two main reasons why organizations are an important part of some people's lifes: sense of belonging and spirit of teamwrok.
——【movies】电影流行
1. 主题 There are two main reasons why movies are popular all over the world: entertainment and education.
——真题:【pets】饲养宠物
1. 主题 There are two main reasons why many people have a close relationship with their pets: companion and fun.

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illustrate ['iləstreit]

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v. 举例说明,(为书)作插图,图解

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achievement [ə'tʃi:vmənt]

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n. 成就,成绩,完成,达到

 
conclusion [kən'klu:ʒən]

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n. 结论

 
relevant ['relivənt]

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adj. 相关的,切题的,中肯的

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entertainment [.entə'teinmənt]

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n. 娱乐

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longevity [lɔn'dʒeviti]

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n. 长寿

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extent [iks'tent]

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n. 广度,宽度,长度,大小,范围,范围,程度

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academic [.ækə'demik]

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adj. 学术的,学院的,理论的
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companion [kəm'pænjən]

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n. 同伴,同事,成对物品之一,(船的)甲板间扶梯(或扶

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