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为了更形象化的帮助大家了解优秀的托福口语句子,小编和大家分享一篇通过例题讲解托福口语资料的优缺点,通过对不足之处以及怎样提高进行分析,将托福口语优秀的句子形象化、可视化。
  例题:
  Choose a place you go to often that is important to you and explain why it is important. Please include specific details in your explanation.
  Answer:
  The most important place to me is library. I like reading very much. In library I can read books I want, novels, science books, even history books. The knowledge I want is prepared to me.
  解析
  (1) Original: In library I can read books I want, novels, science books, even history books.
  Revised: In library I can read books I want, such as, novels, science books, even history books.
  这样会使句子过渡衔接地更加自然,此外,such as它非常口语化,在口语中使用正合适,但是在写作中则不要使用为妙。
  (2)深层次陈述问题方面的欠缺。
  从上面的scripts中可以看得出他在全方位地支撑论点方面还有提升的空间。
  其实他还可以从study, rest, date这几个分支来阐述。具体可以这样表述:Sometimes I can study there. Because it is a very quiet place; it is also a good place for me to take a rest. I can relax in the library. As nobody bothers me there; moreover, the library provides a wonderful environment for lovers to have a date.很明显添加这些内容之后,整个陈述就显得很完整了!

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environment [in'vaiərənmənt]

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n. 环境,外界

 
specific [spi'sifik]

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adj. 特殊的,明确的,具有特效的
n. 特

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explanation [.eksplə'neiʃən]

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n. 解释,说明

 
original [ə'ridʒənl]

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adj. 最初的,原始的,有独创性的,原版的

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