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托福写作批改点评 第15期:TPO12综合写作批改

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The given materials are discussing about whether the teenage portrait auctioned by Jane Austen's descendents is a depictfor herself. The passage gives 3 main reasons to support the argument, while the lecturer retorts them one by one.
First, the passage indicates that theAustens had promised to show a portrait of Jane to public in 1882. However, thelecturer points out that when they declared that, it was 70 years after Jane'sdeath. Those relatives are not possible to have seen Jane in flesh let along [alone] torecognize her.
Second, that the portrait looks alike [like] witha sketch of adult Jane is also questionable according to the lecturer. Becausethe Austens are a large family with hundreds of offsprings. It can be someoneelse's portrait. As a matter of fact, it looks pretty much similar to one of Jane's distant nieces, Mary.
Third, the lecturer is against the opinionthat the painting style links to a private portrait painter who can be worked for the Austens when Jane was a teenager as well. It's untenable to judge merelyfrom the style. Actually, evidence has been found that the canvas which theportrait was on was original from a famous craftsman. And he had not even begunto sell canvas until Jane was 27 years old.


TPO小站综合点评及批改意见:

总的来说,文章内容信息较为准确完整,但个别地方概括的信息不是重点,需要进一步理解阅读部分内容。

表述方面,衔接和转折用得不错,但叙述点没有多大的说服力。

出现较多的语法错误,一定要注意小细节的处理,写完之后要进一步做检查。

预估分数:3.8

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portrait ['pɔ:trit]

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n. 肖像,画像
adj. (文件页面)

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original [ə'ridʒənl]

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adj. 最初的,原始的,有独创性的,原版的

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evidence ['evidəns]

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n. 根据,证据
v. 证实,证明

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lecturer ['lektʃərə]

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n. 演讲者,讲师

 
untenable ['ʌn'tenəbl]

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adj. 不能防守的,不能维持的,支持不住的

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questionable ['kwestʃənəbəl]

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adj. 可疑的,可置疑的

 
canvas ['kænvəs]

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n. 帆布,(帆布)画布,油画

 
sketch [sketʃ]

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n. 素描,草图,概述,梗概
v. 速写,草拟

 

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