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综合写作
Topic议题 | ||
Coral. Bay形成的原因 | ||
Reading | Listening | |
Thesis总论点 | 陨石爆炸 meteorite impact theory | 阅读的理论不对 |
Sub-point 1 分论点1 | Asymmetrical depressions 沟壑不均匀是由于爆炸的裂缝导致材料填充不足，东南部沙子多西北部沙子少 | 不均匀的原因可能是水流引起的，而且水流更好的解释了沙子不均匀的方向 |
Sub-point2 分论点2 | 陨石的爆炸产生的高温导致沙子没有铁外衣 | 如果是高温的话更可能形成玻璃，但是并没有发现玻璃。而且沙子没有铁外衣可能由于化学反应造成的 |
Sub-point3 分论点3 | 发现了buckyball，是由于爆炸是产生的巨大压力导致的 | 如果是爆炸导致buckyball，那么buckyball应该广泛存在于所有地带，但实际上只有少数几个海湾发现了buckyball |
独立写作
Do you agree or disagree with the statement: It is better to make friends who are intelligent than with a good sense of humor.
Making friends are indispensable in everyone's life. There is no denying the fact that intelligence and humor are two vital characters of a good friend. Some people, however, may claim that it is better to make friends with intelligent people than with people who have a good sense of humor. As for me, I'm quite agree with it
To begin with, intelligent friends often enlighten us and teach us something useful that is benefit for our life and career. It means that we will be influenced by intelligent people and inclined to gain some characters from them. Most importantly, intelligent friends also have a proper goal. They manage their time for their goal, implementing it and complementing themselves, so they have a relatively high probability to success in their life. Staying long with a friend who is intelligent like this, we will be intelligent gradually too. We can learn a lot of wholesome things from them, but a friend who has a good sense of humor just can brings us jokes. In our daily life, I thought intelligence is user than jokes.
Furthermore, an intelligent friend helps us more when we are in trouble. Compared with the humorous friends, an intelligent people think more about the problem in a rational way. Useful suggestions and help from them will of much more importance to resolve the trouble we meet. For instance, if I was in trouble, those friends who are intelligent are more likely to put forth some constructive suggestions for me, while humorous friends may make a joke on me in a improper time. Although their jokes will relax me temporary, but in fact it is suggestion that resolve the problem at this moment and jokes do nothing.
Nevertheless, a humorous friend is also beneficial to us. We will have fun and happiness when we stay with them, which probable leads a high efficiency in our work and study. To sum up, it will be a pleasure to make friends both with intelligent people and humorous people. If I have to choose, however, I prefer to make friends with intelligent people than with people who have a good sense of humor for the reason above.
