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首段：背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场
A man without education is a victim of adversity, however, educationalists have been pondering, for many years, which one is more preferable, specialized education or comprehensive education. Convincing arguments could be explored to justify both sides. As I see it, it is of immense value for students to receive the comprehensive education to enhance one’s all-round abilities.
【解析】
A man without education is a victim of adversity. 一个没有受过教育的人是逆境的牺牲品。
二段：专才教育的利好
Granted, those who support the specialized education do have reasons to some extent. For one thing, it is extremely efficient for the learners to acquire knowledge more effectively when applying themselves to only one subject. For another, it exerts a beneficial impact on the future job-hunting, for the specialists can definitely meet the demand of some enterprises. The training of athletes, cooks and other professionals can serve as perfect examples.
【解析】
1. applying themselves to only one subject 只专注学习一门课程
2. athletes, cooks and other professionals 运动员，厨师或者其他的专业人士
三段：通才教育的利好
Nonetheless， on no account could we ignore the immense value of general education. First, acquiring divergent subjects could help enlarge ones’ knowledge scope and foster more competences. Still, by means of all-round learning, it can add spice to students’ dull routine of daily life. It is conceivable that one can cultivate various hobbies and talents as a generalist. Last, knowledge is not a burden. Acquiring a wide range of subjects could enable one to better prepare him or her for the future career challenges because the moral education and character-training it covers could be beneficial to ones’ growth
【解析】
1. add spice to students’ dull routine of daily life. 增加生活的乐趣
2. moral education and character-training 道德教育和性格培养
尾段：亮明观点
In closing, it is fairly difficult to say that the special education is the better way to cultivate the youngsters. My view is that everyone could benefit a great deal from the general learning, both psychologically and intellectually.
【语料库】
1. generalist n通才
2. specialist n专才
3. specialized education n专才教育
4. comprehensive education n通才教育
5. acquire a range of subjects v学习广泛的课程
6. acquire a wealth of knowledge v 学习大量的知识
7. travel in the ocean of the knowledge v畅游知识的海洋
8. avoid the possible risk of unemployment v 避免失业的风险
9. knowledge is not a kind of burden 艺多不压身
10. help one be well-prepared for the future career challenges 帮助一个人适应未来事业的挑战
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