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The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear energy overweigh the disadvantages. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer.
谢振礼雅思范文 Example Essay 3-6-6-3：
圆形逻辑——四段定位——18句装配
【起三句】范围由宽而窄，起中有合
1. The sense of doom across the world today is not a fear of nuclear power but a fear of war because nuclear weapons have enlarged the mechanism of war by threatening to kill more people more secretly and more horribly than those of the past. 申论主题
2. Considering that there is no way to outlaw a war, the only alternative is to go nuclear in the hope that nuclear weapons hidden in stock somewhere serve to maintain world peace by theory of counter-attack. 集中焦点
3. And yet, going nuclear serves the purpose of energy supply, and as such the classic question arises: "to be or not to be?" 一分为二
【承六句】
4. Being cheap and clean, nuclear energy is a solution to an energy crisis at a time when other forms of generating energy are facing limits. 招牌句来自起段第三句，回到合段第16句。
5. Already power plants have been in operation in a number of countries.
6. These are successful examples to be followed, despite the fact that a few isolated incidents did happen, including a recent one in Japan's Fukushima area overwhelmed by tsunami.
7. Now that more advanced nuclear technology is supposed to keep power plants safe from damage, it should come as no surprise that more nuclear facilities are being built for peaceful use.
8. In all appearances, the fear of war is overcome by the need for economic development.
9. Many people are convinced that the benefits of nuclear power will outweigh the drawbacks in the long run.
【转六句】
10. Regardless of the fear of a nuclear war, there is no turning back from being engaged in nuclear development for peace or otherwise. 招牌句来自起段第3句，回到合段第16句。
11. It depends on the feeling of mutual trust on the international front to ensure lasting peace.
12. Fortunately, there seems to exist an agreement that nuclear weapons should be the last thing to be thought of as a means to win a war because there would be no winner in any nuclear conflict.
13. If anything goes wrong, the scale of destruction on human lives and civilization is beyond imagination.
14. The nightmare of Hiroshima remains vivid memory.
15. But so what?
【合三句】范围由窄而宽。合中有起。
16. To sum up, whether going nuclear is good or bad, or something in between, depends on who you ask. 二合为一. 收回两个招牌句4+10=3=16
17. In spite of reasonable fear for a nuclear war, nuclear know-how is not warlike, but rather a by-product of a warlike society. 还原焦点
18. And the world must seize it for good--for peaceful use forever. 重申主题
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