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雅思原创固定刑罚语料库：
1. Youth crime can take a variety of forms，from school bullying to street violence or sex assault. 青少年犯罪的形式多样，从校园欺凌到街头暴力，或者是性侵犯。
解析：a variety of adj 各种各样的
2. The same penalty should not be imposed on juvenile law-breakers and adult criminals，even though young perpetrators should be accountable for their anti-social offences. 少年犯不应该和成年犯受到完全相同的处罚，尽管少年犯也应该为自己的行为负责。
解析：be accountable for …… v对于……负责
3. Heavier penalty might make those who are led astray feel depressed or hopeless. 严重的处罚力度会使那些被引入歧途者感到沮丧或者绝望。
4. It is extremely hard for released young prisoners to earn a decent living, especially when they lack the basic working skills or survival abilities. 对于青少年刑满释放人员而言，体面地谋生很艰难，尤其是当他们缺乏基本的工作技能以及生存能力的时候。
5. Job training is for teenage prisoners who embarked on the criminal road impulsively is worthwhile. 对于因为冲动走上犯罪道路的少年犯而言，工作培训是有价值的。
6. Those who are set free are less likely to led into recommit crime and more likely to turn over a new life. 刑满释放者不容易再次犯罪，更加可能改过自新。
解析：turn over a new life v改过自新
7. As for some teenage criminals or those who are led astray, they may, in most cases, have few opportunities to receive fine education and thus own poor law-abiding awareness. 对于一些少年犯或者过失犯罪者而言，他们也许在大多情况下没有机会接受良好的教育，因此缺乏良好守法意识。
解析：law-abiding awareness n 守法意识
8. Therefore，another key strategy is to provide young prisoners with educational opportunities，which could helps those who are still in the formative years to reflect on oneself and make a clear distinction between right and wrong. 因此，另外一个关键的策略就是给青少年服刑者提供教育的机会，这可以帮助那些依然在成长中的年轻人自我反思，明辨是非。
解析：those who are still in the formative years n 依然在成长中的年轻人
解析：make a clear distinction between right and wrong v 明辨是非
9. What sanctions will be employed should take the circumstances of a crime and its motivation into account. 采取何种处罚措施应该考虑到犯罪的情形和动机。
拓展：sanctions = punishment = penalty n 处罚
解析：employ v 使用
解析：take …… into account 考虑……
10. Fixing punishments for young criminals and adult offenders is a hasty approach对于少年犯和成年犯固定刑罚是轻率的做法。
解析：…… is a hasty approach ……是一种轻率的做法
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