三段:策略的展开:(如果改变人们对于旅游业的消极态度)
In spite of some demerits triggered by promoting international tourism,the glaring merits can be cited to alter some people’s cold attitudes. First, tourism is one of the most stimulating factors to spur the economy. For example, China needs a great amount of foreign currencies for its modernization drive. Tourism is one of the most significant ways to obtain such currencies. Also, it a business that could provide numerous job opportunities. In the tourist attractions, it is common to that even those uneducated people can make a living simply by selling souvenirs, local specialties and so on, which relieves the employment pressure of local government. To illustrate, tourism facilities the development of the catering business and local public transit. Last, tourism is positive to cultural diversity and could promote the mutual understanding and friendships among people from diverse countries, thus, it will create the future cooperation in the international affairs.
雅思解析:
1. In spite of some demerits triggered by promoting international tourism,the glaring merits can be cited to alter some people’s cold attitudes 尽管国际旅游业带来一些弊端,其明显的利好可被引用帮助人们改变对于国际旅游业的消极态度。
2. Tourism facilities the development of the catering business and local public transit. 旅游业有助于餐饮业和地方交通的发展。
3. tourism is positive to cultural diversity and could promote the mutual understanding and friendships among people from different countries, thus, it will create the future cooperation in the international affairs. 旅游业有助于文化的多元性,增进不同国家之间人们的友谊和理解,因此,会在国际事务中促成更多的合作。
尾段:作家立场:
In a nutshell,my stand is that whether the effect of international travel is positive or negative, one thing is certain that it will continue to be indispensable part for both visitors and relevant nations, therefore, international tourism should be advocated. To ordinary people, traveling is definitely one of the most effective ways to relieve pressure and expand mind. As for many nations, promoting tourism is a powerful force to spur domestic demand and booms the economy.
雅思解析:
1. Whether the effect of international travel is positive or negative, one thing is certain that it will continue to be indispensable part for both visitors and relevant nations. 不管旅游的影响是好是坏,有一件事是可以肯定的,旅游将会继续是我们生活中重要的一部分, 不仅仅是对于游客,更是对于拥有旅游资源的国家。
2. To ordinary people, traveling is definitely one of the most effective ways to relieve pressure and expand mind. 对于普通人来说,旅游当然是缓解压力和开拓视野的最有效的方式之一。
3. As for many nations, promoting tourism is a powerful force to spur domestic demand and booms the economy. 对于国家而言,旅游是促进内需,刺激经济增长的重要力量。
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