1.If you really want to have success with women then you need to learn the right way to attract a woman.
你若想对女人成功，就要学会吸引女人的正确方法。

have success with...表示“在（某事上）……成功”

例如：He have score a great success with his new play.
他的那出新戏获得了极大的成功。

2. What I mean by this is that you have to avoid doing what 99% of all men do.
我的意思是，你得避免99%的男人都犯的错误。

avoid doing sth.表示“避免做某事”

例如：You must avoid making decisions in a hurry.
你切忌仓促做出抉择。

3. If you always cave into her demands, then she will actually get bored of you.
你若总是对她唯命是从，那么她就会真的对你感到厌烦。

这句中文大家应该很熟了吧，那么它的英文表达，你记住了吗？

cave into one's demand “对……唯命是从”

get bored of...表示“对……厌倦”

例如： You've participated in boxing for so many years, you never get bored of it?
你从事拳击这么久，有没有感到厌倦？