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The Popularity of Getting Certificates on Campus
①Currently, getting certificates is quite popular on campus. The advertisements for training schools occupy a large proportion of the bulletin board, and booksellers fill their shelves with many reference books. And eager students spare their money and time for these courses and books.
②There are several advantages in this matter. The biggest one is that with more certificates, students are accessible to more and better job opportunities. Besides, they can make more contacts with the outside world in the course of getting certificates.③However, every coin has two sides. The pursuit of certificates is no exception. Some students believe that ④the more certificates, the better.⑤One can hardly make progress this way, but can become bookish easily. Some of them even neglect their routine learning in the process of getting certificates.
From my viewpoint, certificates certify students’ previous efforts. ⑥But whether these pieces of paper can benefit students or not, depends on what they have really gained. Therefore, before dazzling choices, we must have a clear attitude and scientific strategy, and then certificates are beneficial.
①开门见山，说明这种现象的存在，接下来，作者从学校海报栏的广告，书店经营者和学生三方面来进一步说明该现象。
②首先论述其优点，并用了一些连接词表明句与句之间的关系。该部分的结构是There are several advantages...The biggest one ...Besides,...。
③接下来论述的是其存在的缺点，并用However表示转折。
④The +形容词比较级，the +形容词比较级，表示“越…，越…”。学会使用这种结构能让文章增色不少。
⑤这个句子用了hardly和easily，形成鲜明的对比，给人印象深刻。
⑥本句结构whether...or not 引出本文观点。
